Monday, 8 June 2020

Persuasive Writing

               My persuasive writing

Did you know that if there's an emergency it takes 30min to get to greymouth hospital?
Hi my name is Likaia

If we build a hospital in hokitika it will be easier for people who have serious conditions to go to hospital. We go to the doctors if  we are sick. but if it is very serious the doctor will send you to hospital. There used to be a hospital hokitika a long time ago but they put it down because it was getting old. I think we should fundraise to build another.

If we have a hospital in Hokitika we will be  able to get more workers in Hokitika and mame the town bigger. if we build a hospital in hokitika we will be able to get more doctors and nurses in hokitika.

These reasons show why I would like a hospital in hokitika. Please help us fundraise.

By likaia.


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